#1
Just tell me what you think... i don't really care how brutal you are...
C4C


(Verse)
The empty nights and the firefly lights
Remember those clear night skies
Her crimson hair and her flourishing eyes
She takes me to a place where I feel alive

(Chorus)
A place I can be me,
A place I can feel free
I know now the lesson of love
Is the place that I've been dreaming of?

(Verse)
The long kisses and the endless touch
I'm afraid I'll love her just too much
The smile she brings
The melodies I sing
Have taken me to this place
I thought I'd never be

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
The look in your eyes when you see me
And all the things that I could not see
Head on my shoulder and holding me tight
Softer than this summer's night
Until the day I die
'Cuz no, I can't deny
I'm living in....

(Chorus to fade)
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!


Last edited by popeye100 at Mar 18, 2008,
#2
Sounds like something you got from revenge of the nerds movie :P and modded it.
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#3
actually I wrote in like 3 minutes.... i was just bored as hell at school and done this to pass time...thus is why I do not care what anyone says about it because I know I can do better.... and what the hell is Revenge Of The Nerds Movie?... you would know what that is....anyway.... yea, really dont care.... the thing I want to focus on is how well i can quickly write following lines.... if that makes any since...
Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!


#4
pretty good for a song you wrote in three minutes. it flows really well and you have a bridge which i cant seem to write for the life of me.