#1
Fight On

A dreadful plauge has gripped our land
from the mountain tops to the grains of sand
our majestic home which once shawn bright
now lays in ruin and dycreptic plight

The steel lay broken
and the bodies empty
the will is broke
but the spirit still fights on

We will fight on
till death grips our soul
the fury of our spirit
in our blades it will show

Carry on brave soul
on the winds your crys will be heard
your death wont be in vain
for you will always
Fight On

We mourn the lost, but dare not weep
the heartless scourge, the do not sleep
we attack at dawn, we'll take to arms
the last will of man, we take back what is ours

We'll forge the blade
and string the bows
the fire that burns inside
will burn our foes
Jackson RR3 - BKP Painkiller/Warpig
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Last edited by Sheepbane at Mar 18, 2008,
#3
that is what it is ^-^
power/folk
ensiferum meets dragonforce lol
Jackson RR3 - BKP Painkiller/Warpig
Bugera 333XL 212
Pod Studio UX1
MXR Smart Gate
Hardwire CM-2
#4
Its really good.
I like it and it does have the whole power metal vibe to it.

The lyrics really do great justice to the title.
They do give the spirit and hope of fighting on.
Good use of strong words. They portray strength throughout the lyrics.

"We will fight on
till death grips our soul
the fury of our spirit
in our blades it will show

Carry on brave soul
on the winds your crys will be heard
your death wont be in vain
for you will always
Fight On"

I absolutely love this part!
It is awesome!
#5
if you have songs you wish to be crit, please post links and i will gladly crit
Jackson RR3 - BKP Painkiller/Warpig
Bugera 333XL 212
Pod Studio UX1
MXR Smart Gate
Hardwire CM-2
#7
Quote by Sheepbane
if you have songs you wish to be crit, please post links and i will gladly crit


Please crit my song I Dont Want To wait another day Oh and I like the song
#8
I agree with what was said earlier about it being kick ass for power metal, and sounding like dragonforce. Dragonforce came to mind as soon as I started reading it. Maybe put in a rhyming pattern for second and third parts, so it maintains a better rhythm, but other than that, it's great. As for crit for crit, mine wasn't exactly helpful, so you don't have to, but if you want, mine is Justify The Means. I don't have a link, but it's currently on the first page.
#9
cool song dude. i like the whole battle thing you got going on. ima check out some more stuff, if you got any new lyrics in the process of being written show me at school. im not a good crit or anything but i can tell you if it sux or not hahaha