#1
ya basicly im not going out with her she has a bf but she asked me to write her a song any ideas so far i think ill do something about eyes and maybe like a metaphor with stars?
#4
Yeah... at least get the girl first...
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#9
i think you should cover something like layla.

i know she wants you to write a song but sometimes a cover will be a better choice as the lyrics are from a professional usually with past experience in what the song is about.
#10
Death metal all the way. Compare her smooth skin, to the slippery insides of a freshly sliced large intestine. Brutal.
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#11
Tearing, ripping, slashing, and clawing
The knife across your face is drawing
You've not yet seen what I've in store
The stars your eyes shall see no more
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Tearing, ripping, slashing, and clawing
The knife across you're face is drawing
You've not yet seen what I've in store
The stars your eyes shall see no more


See, this guy has the right idea.
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#13
Just play Wonderwall. If it doesn't get her in bed, she's a lesbian.
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#15
thats wierd that she asked you...
was she serious when she asked you or was she laughing
if she was laughing, you want to make it funny because i'm then assuming you two are friends(or she feels you two are).
If she wants it to be serious, then its tough, especailly because you two aren't going out.
So id say if ou two are freinds, write a song about your friendship(if you want it to be serious
If your kinda friends, but not close friends(which i think is most cases) write a simple song thatt just makes her laugh
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#16
do NOT write a song about a girl who has a boyfriend.
in the shallow terms:

1. no possibility for "reward"
2. boyfriend could try and start macho ****.


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#17
chances are she wont have heard .. dire straits - romeo and juliet .. pretty easy to play too.

lyrics kick ass.
#18
Maybe you could start off with like....


I cum blood everytime i think of you!


She'll love you for the rest of her life for that!
#20
You could also write a REALLY cheesy song about getting into her pants. So cheesy that she'll think you're joking.

"Baby if you and I did it baby, I'd come instantly baby, 'cause you're so beautiful, baby"
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#21
Your eyes are like stars... a cold distant luminous ball of plasma that began life as a collapsing cloud of hydrogen and helium.

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#22
I Cum Blood...acoustic?
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[quote="'[x"]Huffy[x]']I Cum Blood...acoustic?
YES!


but when you think about it, how would that actually sound? i want to hear someone do that
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YES!


but when you think about it, how would that actually sound? i want to hear someone do that

Requesting someone make an acoustic cover STAT.
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#25
I'ld actually love to do an acoustic cover of I cum blood.
But the lyrics are really a little too much for my likes!
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do NOT write a song about a girl who has a boyfriend.
in the shallow terms:

1. no possibility for "reward"
2. boyfriend could try and start macho ****.

Yes because the only reason you would write a song is to get laid

Not that it would be fun or anything

#28
Dude **** her gently
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#31
If that guy finds out.........


...........


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You're f*cked.

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#32
cover good friends and a bottle of pills by pantera, but say you wrote it for her boyfriend,
for those of you that don't know I think that the first lyrics are something like
'i ****ed your girlfriend last night, she called me daddy and I called her baby and I smacked her ass' goes on somewhat like this for about a minute
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