#1
I've been working on it for a little while, and it's getting acceptable. Please drop some opinions, criticisms, suggestions, etc. Thanks.
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Hell Angel.zip
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#3
The measures were my biggest issue, too.

There's a problem I have with punk. It's not the whole "break the rules" thing. That's well enough. But the music seems to come at you like a wall of noise. It's the same problem I have with symphonic orchestra.

Anyways, it seemed to short to give a real critique. I noticed you had a running theme in the music of "dun dun dun-dun", just it seemed kind of hollow. Maybe having a rhythm guitar to back it with half or whole notes would help.