Begins very Zeppelin-esque. I like it. It makes me think of a rainy day at home with friends. I think the G string is a tad flat. I'm not a fan of the vocal style but it definitely goes with the music. I could see this being an indie hit. Extrapolate and clean it up and you've got a hit!

I've got a song up if you wouldn't mind taking a listen. It's a slightly different genre but I welcome ALL criticism.

Very nice and pretty. However, the lead in the beginning is a little flat. The beginning is very Zeppelin/RHCP-esque. The vocals would probably sound better un-distorted/un-faded or whatever you did to make them sound like that. Just make it a little cleaner, and it would sound awesome.
Thanks, didn't realize the electric was outta tune lol, I'll fix that up later.
I really like it. It's very ambient with those background vocals, and all the guitar parts sound really great. Maybe turn the electric guitar at 40 seconds down a little bit. And yeah it was just a little bit out of tune.

Wow.... those vocals are interesting.... really not my style to be honest, but I'm sure there's an audience for it lol.

But all in all, it's a pretty good piece. I'll give it an 8/10.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=817149
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I agree, very zepplin-esque. Sounds very pretty and melodic. I especially like the effect in the backround that either sounds like rain or static. It really helps the effect of the song

crit mine?

Arbor A410 Bass
Dinosaur 20 Watt Bass Amp
Line 6 Spider III 75 Watt
Squier Bullet

Excuse me sir, have you been thinking tonight?
this is amazing, def one of the best things ive heard on ug for ages (apart from my own hits.)

are you coming out with an album? (if you have one already, tell me the link )
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