#2
You have some good ideas, like in the beginning of I Fight Sharks For Charity. That opera-ish part rocked! Try screaming a little less though. Or at least a little softer. It sounds like you're just screaming "RAHRAHRAHRAHRAHRHARHARAH" over and over again, and it doesn't sound that good. You aren't bad, though.
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