#1
recorded a short mix of this song to improve my sound capturing experience have a listen its on here http://www.belsenfeast.bebo.com
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#2
im covering this next week!

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Yeh the SICK! bit sounds a bit stupid.

#4
ohh man the guitars and bass sound great. you do need to work on the vocals tho. you just.. aren't singing the on key at all. in the chorus the vocals realllly kill it. theres just no emotion and its off key, sorry man. but the rest of the instrumentation is good throughout (including the guitar solo)
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#5
yeah vocals arent something i try, hopefully if i keep plugging my vocals will improve
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Dean Baby V
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Bugera 333 Head
Laney Cab Vintage 30's
Dunlop Crybaby
Boss RC-2
Boss MT-2 (modified)
Marshall Jackhammer
#6
yeah just keep recording yourself singing no matter what it sounds like. I recorded a bunch of stuff over the course of about a year and thats the sole reason i can sing at all now.
If you expect a kick in the balls and get a slap in the face, it's a victory.
-Ardal O'Hanlon

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#7
I give you props for trying the vocals. Sure, they could use some work, but you tried!

The guitars sound great! I liked how you panned them over the stereo field.
I thought the bass was a tad muddy, but that might be my "computer" speakers!
But you might try sticking an EQ on the bass track, and kill anything above about 1k. That should keep it out of the guitar's sonic area...

Some drums would really make this a killer track!


If you have a chance, would you listen to my cover song?

Gimme Shelter

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