#1
This is the first minute of a song i just started writing. I just wrote and recorded as I went along, and I intend to resume work on it when I return from vacation after this weekend. PLease listen and crit!!!

www.myspace.com/JoeHeider

It's called Chakrapreview. I picked the title chakra because their are 7 chakras and the song is mostly in 7/16 time.

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#2
It has a real sweet groove to it. I would turn up the rhythm track up a bit because the leads cut through a bit too loud. I'm always really intrigued when people write in such weird timing, I give you mad props on that. Its melodic enough for someone who is used to 4/4 to get into and thats definetely a good thing.

crit me if you can

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=817331
Originally posted by J_Dizzle
THAAAANK YOU GoodCharloteSux is god