Hey guys, I just recorded a random song. It's in my profile, and comments/suggestions would be appreciated.

Last edited by lucascrouse at Mar 23, 2008,
Dude, I dig it! Love that rockin' blues spiced up with some Marshall and Les Paul.

BTW...that is a trip guitar...Looks like a flying V-Paul or something...cool.
Thank you! Yea, I bought it because I've never seen any other guitar like it. It's awesome.
didnt like the beginning a whole lot but the soloing sounded good. overall it was a pretty tight piece and i also liked how the lead of being complemented by the rhythm guitar.

right now im looking for some uploading my song, maybe you can take a look
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holy crap, that was honestly one of the best improvs I've heard in a long time. sounds very ZZTop'ish. I have one critisism though, when you start the tapping lick (was it tapping?) it starts to get a weaker, and it threw of the timing and such. But once that is straightened out it will be an almost perfect song.

anyways: crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=821881
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Hahaa oh yes...That lick honestly, was the only thing that wasn't improvised, I came up with it when I was playing some random stuff and I had to re-record that part like 10 times. But all the rest soloing is improv'd, thank you for the comments and I shall crit your guys' too!
great riffs man... i especially liked the tapping part in the middle... and also the way it ended off

a well put together improvisation haha
it was great... i really enjoyed it

feel free to check out some of my stuff on my profile
My Gear

Epiphone Les Paul Standard
Epiphone Elitist Paul Mccartney Texan
Orange Tiny Terror
Vox Valvetronix AD 30
Vox V847 Wah
Metal Muff EQ (broken )
Boss RC-2 Loop pedal

Me playing
Damn dude, that's a swinging track. The solo's sweet, though there wasn't much build up at all which could be very helpful. Also, a bass part would complete the sound nicely, and if there already is one sorry because I can't hear it. Nice jam overall.

My stuff
Fender Telecaster Aerodyne Series
Gibson 1980 Les Paul Standard
Fender Standard Strat
Taylor 414-ce
Takamine Acoustic
1938 Gibson Lap Steel (priceless)
Fender Blues Junior
USA Big Muff Pi
Danelectro Fab Overdrive

My band
your funk groove was very very cool man. loved the ripping on parts. complimented nicely. my stuff is not really technical, well, none recorded. but i'd appreciate a crit or two. they are song based so don't expect heavy shred or anything.

anyone welcome to crit