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What did we do?
How did it come to this?
This misread feeling
will scar us evermore.
Where do we turn?
Now what path do we take?
What can all our faith
help us to achieve?

This isn't good or bad.
Answers scream, we listen.
They think its more than that.
They're blind to secrets hidden.

Denial never leaves,
its simply tossed aside.
Why cant a storm destroy,
this trailer park of lies?

This isn't good or bad.
Answers scream, we listen.
They think its more than that. <---------That's the chorus, if you didn't notice
They're blind to secrets hidden.

Before we overflow,
with lost forgotten cries,
let's bottle up our torture,
and let our arrows fly.
And while we plead for mercy,
we scream into the skies,
"There's nothing left for us,
we offer up our lives."

So, please post your comments. And, I will c4c, the only reason I won't is because A) you didn't actually crit mine, you just said 'good job' B) I don't find anything wrong with your work.
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