Please crit my new funky/sythy guitar song. I'm thinking of submitting it to the second UG album and I wanted to see what you guys thought, and any improvements i should make before I do.

C4C ofc.

Btw, please forgive the cheesy name, UG's Trick Sack.
This man doesn't need Old Gregg's funk to be funky.

I really like it, man.

I lol'd @ the name, Vai much?
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Very funky.
I don't think there's anything wrong with it at all.
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I loved this! Very smooth. The only thing I didnt like was the hi-hat sound in places was too hissy but otherwise very impressive.

take a listen to mine?
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Oh man, that's so badass. Loving it. Great phrasing and tone, great slap bass, great drums.

My only complaint so far would be the drums are a tad overpowering.

Oooh, good change of pace. The synth goes suprising well with the funky blues shred. Really wouldn't have expected it.

9/10, it only looses points for the drums being a little overpowering.