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Pretty, good I like the instrumentation.

Singing is pretty good for the most part, there are a little parts that are shaky, but pretty solid for the most part.


Here is my cover of it, the guitar is a little harsh i know. With our crappy computer mic.

http://mrjs.dmusic.com/music/
Last edited by cray159 at Mar 21, 2008,
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Quote by cray159
Pretty, good I like the instrumentation.

Singing is pretty good for the most part, there are a little parts that are shaky, but pretty solid for the most part.


Here is my cover of it, the guitar is a little harsh i know. With our crappy computer mic.

http://mrjs.dmusic.com/music/


Thanks for the comments and taking a listen

I really like the electric guitar parts on yours, a little loud at the beginning maybe.
You have a strong voice, especially on the tail end of the verses and the final chorus.....I noticed you dodged the falsetto like myself, haha. Other than that...hmmm...it's a little linear I guess, like its pretty much the same start to finish, maybe a bigger finish would help, your vocals go that direction at the end but the rest is still kinda chugging along. Good stuff though