#1
(Verse)
Should have realized sooner
Just what was going on
All your pieces fit together
But your puzzle was not done

(Chorus)
And now it seems
That all of this
Was just a waste of time
I can't believe
That i thought
I thought that you were mine

(Verse)
This was so unexpected
How could i have known
It came without a warning
And now I'm on my own

(Bridge)
So poorly timed
Thoughts left behind
All this time spent
Time wasted on you

(Solo)

(Chorus)
And now it seems
That all of this
Was just a waste of time
I can't believe
That i thought
I thought that you were mine

Thoughts?

C4C
#2
I like
--"Hey, don't worry; don't be afraid, ever, because this is just a ride."--
#3
bit vague... the verses could do with being longer and a bit more indepth and i think you should carry on the theme of a puzzle.
#4
I think it is pretty good, but it needs a bit of work. I guess I will be another crit that doesn't tell you much and is really short...
#5
1st thing that I notice about it that isn't good is the lack of verse... make them longer. =P

Like the chorus, only criticism of it's that there isn't enough content to it. You only really make 2 points in 6 lines, I'd try to condense it and get more points in there.

Also, what genre are you looking for here?
#6
Def go with the theme of a puzzle,

"All your pieces fit together but your puzzle was not done"

is a great line