I wrote this in about 1/2 an hour, it is influenced by "the bucket" by kings of leon

Took me 15 years just to reach you
15 more just to teach you
18 thousand miles just to se you
18 thousand more just to see my truth
You get the glory, you get the fame
You take the money, ill take the blame
Walk across the desert, swim through the sea
Run from the wrecking ball that i cant see
So take all your clothes, and take all your books
Take your guitar, and your good looks
You will be the one to reolize, what you just left behind
And all i ever found in you was a lie

All feedback is appreciated
v. nice...reolize is realize...but still pretty nice...look forward to some more lyrics from you
Quote by merkin72792
how is this against the rules?

Reading the rules will aid you in finding out.
This is not a pipe