#1
Here's a song I wrote today for my band, we've just come out of the studio recording our first demo and we're writing more and more songs, this songs called crying, I'm not a good songwriter, and it may be dificult to get accross what I'm trying to achieve with the song, so heres a link to the actual music of the song which i posted in the Riffs & Recordings forum earlier

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=13409672#post13409672

[Verse 1]

Like the pack of wolves
Who hunt their prey
You don't have to speak
But I know what you'll say

Lets make a list and
Sum up your fears
Come back to mine
And be reduced to tears

But

[Chorus]

Crying won't do you no good
No matter what they say
Crying wont change the world
So everyone else can go away

Crying won't do you no good
No matter what they say
Crying wont change the world
So everyone else can go away

[Verse 2]

A problem shared
Is a problem halved
Or is it more writing
Waiting to be carved

In stone
The words will be set
Though everybody
Else will forget

But

[Chorus]

Crying won't do you no good
No matter what they say
Crying wont change the world
So everyone else can go away

Crying won't do you no good
No matter what they say
Crying wont change the world
So everyone else can go away

[Verse 3]

Like the pack of wolves
Who hunt their prey
You don't have to speak
But I know what you'll say

Lets make a list and
Sum up your fears
Come back to mine
And be reduced to tears

But

[Chorus]

Crying won't do you no good
No matter what they say
Crying wont change the world
So everyone else can go away

Crying won't do you no good
No matter what they say
Crying wont change the world
So everyone else can go away
Last edited by electricnightma at Mar 22, 2008,
#2
Wow... I really, really like it, try not ruin it while adding music.
the repitition of
"Like the pack of wolves
Who hunt their prey
You don't have to speak
But I know what you'll say"
Is goooood.
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#3
Quote by FFTLxx
Wow... I really, really like it, try not ruin it while adding music.
the repitition of
"Like the pack of wolves
Who hunt their prey
You don't have to speak
But I know what you'll say"
Is goooood.


I'm glad you like it

but check out the audio file too,to see if you think it compliments or what.