#2
pretty good, I like it, keep it up
Gear
Jekyll and Hyde
DD3 Delay
NS2 Noise gate
FAB chorus
Crybaby 535Q
HT-5 stack
1979 Gretsch BST 1000
Epiphone Les Paul Standard
Schecter Gryphon
Fender American Strat
Taylor T5 Custom
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#3
the singing is a little flat, it helps to write the song around the key that you are going to be singing in. if you find your key, the song would be pretty BA.