#1
When I first saw you
You dazzled me with your beauty
I couldn’t believe my eyes
You looked like an angel from God

Chorus:
Let me share my love with you
You mean everything for me
Let me share my love with you
You mean everything for me

My heart is burning
Oh yeah, only for you
I don’t know how to conquer your heart
But I do know I love you

Let me share my love with you
You mean everything for me
Let me share my love with you
You mean everything for me

Oh tell me, baby
Do you love me too
I just got to know
Do you love me too
#2
I like it.. but I think the chorus is a little too repeated.. IMO, you should put some different lines in there

"When I die, I want people to play my music, go wild and freak out and do anything they want to do." - Jimi Hendrix


"A dream you dream alone is only a dream. A dream you dream together is reality." - John Lennon


I'm a GIRL!
#4
I'm not much for positive, dreamy songs like this, but this is one of the better ones I've seen. Reminiscent of Girlfriend by Matthew Sweet, in my opinion. Is that similar to what you were looking for?

Personally, I wouldn't repeat the lines in the chorus. Also, "I don’t know how to conquer your heart" doesn't really fit the mood of it. "Conquer" is a somewhat more violent, possessive word than the vocabulary I'd use to achieve a mood like the one in this song.

Apart from that, great job. How long have you been writing?