Our finished demo for our song Notions on Nothing is done and is on my band The Rift FL's profile - you can go there from my profile, just scroll down and you'll see the band picture. It's the middle MP3 on the band page. The vocals aren't perfect, but they're getting better. We're all either 16 or 15, so... it's not perfect, but please crit it, because we really need it!! Thanks!
Cool song, the only thing that needs work is the vocals. Maybe you should have your singer get a vocal coach. He doesn't really have a terrible voice he just needs some work.