#1
Hi, I realize that my earlier post has been closed. Im pretty sure that's it's okay to repost my song, only with a correct title to prevent any further closings. So here it is, and any comments, or suggestions to improve it are welcome.

Eternal Purification:

Pre- Chorus:

The Sun Descends
The Heavens Dim
And Lucifer ascends to purify this Earth.

Verse:

Fear The Dark Lord
For he is here
Set your faith into flames
And Pull out your gear
Everyone will cry as your skin starts to boil,
As each victim drops endlessly to Hell.

Chorus:

The Sun Descends
The Heavens Dim
And Lucifer Ascends to purify this Earth
The Sun Descends
The Heavens Dim
It’s the night of the Antichrist
Now bow down as you die.

(Repeat verse)

-Solo: Jeff -


Chorus2:

You will scream in agony, as he tears through your skin
you will scream, when he smashes your head, and rips out your jaw.
You will scream, as your life starts to fade away
You will scream, cause in hell your frozen heart will thaw.

Chorus:

The Sun Descends
The Heavens Dim
And Lucifer ascends to purify this Earth.
The Sun Descends
The Heavens Dim
It’s the night of the Antichrist
Now bow down as you die.


Du ville lønn idet Anskuelig tar din sjel!

Thank you, Jeff.
#3
I would crit, but I'm just not digging the Satanism stuff. It does have some good lines, but overall, I just don't feel it...also, not sure you were supposed to bump it...
#4
Yeah, well from your name I didn't think that you would like this type of music. As the title claims, it is death/black metal. But thanks anyway.

Also, Im new with this, I didnt realize commenting would bump it. Sorry