#2
I can't really say that I like it. sorry.

it seems like a bunch of notes just smashed together. seriously, time changes midmeasure? it needs at least some structure. the riffs were kinda cool though, so I think if you just give it a better, more constant rhythm and tempo it would sound better. I don't mean one tempo or time sig throughout but you shouldn't be changing it every 4 or so measures.

good luck.