#1
My new song. Rejoice for Valhalla is near

Cant fault a sinister design
Cant fault the passing of time
This is our demise
Never to see the darkened sun arise

Journey within the forest long
March across the fjords where our memories perished
They were frozen within time
And the only way out is through a hole in this heart of mine

Hear our battlecry
It echos to the heavens high
Valhalla draws near
Our enemies clad in fear

Raise your sword up high
Hear an eagle cry
We are alone
Except a legacy carved on thunderstone

Hear our battlecry
It echos to the heavens high
Valhalla draws near
Our enemies clad in fear

Behold the battle magic
Death is so f***ing tragic
We shall live forever!

Love and hate
I cannot discern
at the point of no return

Hear our battlecry
It echos to the heavens high
Valhalla draws near
Our enemies clad in fear
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#4
congrats. you just wrote either something dragonforce would sing or the theme to forgotten realms.

anyway, only actual problem i can see (aside from the topic ) is the second stanza.

those two long lines are quite a mouthful...

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