#1
i dont know if im done with this song yet, i was half asleep when i wrote it and in my head it bears a striking resemblence to hots on for nowhere by zeppelin. so basicly if i get good feedback ill try to write some music for it and if not then ill scrap it.

a woman broke my heart
i got nowhere to go
she tore my soul apart
becuse i loved her so
someone show me mercy
and ill respond in kind
a woman broke my heart
and i dont know why

a woman done me wrong
i can not express
i sang her a love song
it made her so depressed
she looked to me so sweet
when she stabbed me in the chest
a woman done me wrong
because she thought it best
( solo )

a woman broke my heart
i can not express
she tore my soul apart
now im so depressed
she showed me no mercy
when she stabbed me in the chest
a woman broke my heart
because she thought it best

a woman done me wrong
i got nowhere to go
i sang her a love song
because i loved her so
she looked to me so sweet
she looked to me so kind
a woman done me wrong
and i dont know why
#3
okey i actually wrote this song but my stupid computer switched to my brothers profile before i posted it so if someone could close this thread i would be greatful