#1
just the verse i wrote last night. it's about all the people who laugh at us and tellin them to f off.

Everything you say only makes us more determined,
You better shut your face before we stop you bitch's talking,
So listen up, you better hear us out,
'Coz playing real music is we're all about,
Well you seem to think that we have no hope,
So listen up, 'coz Decorum is no joke

please tell me what you think and stuff, like bits you think could be better

Oh yeah, and if anyone has any ideas after tthat it'd be really helpful, five or 6 silibles or however you spell it. Like four different 5 sillible things
Last edited by opc100 at Mar 24, 2008,
#2
is this rap metal?
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