#1
This song is sort of strange. The part with the choir was very Iced Earth-inspired. The rest of it is kinda like BLS, Megadeth, Pantera, and my always DT influences. The drums aren't particularly godly, but I'm no drummer! I just put them there for fun.


Enjoy!
Attachments:
Hemophilia.zip
#2
It was cool but there are some improvements that could be made... You should try to harmonize certain guitar parts, because it's kind of silly when 2 guitars just play the same thing. The middle acoustic part got a little on my nerves because it started to drag after a few bars. The solo was cool though, it fit the song perfectly and didn't irritate me!

overall: 7/10

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=818349

grtz
#3
this is a really cool tune dude, like the breakdown, but it does go on a little too long. chord progressions are nice though, and solos cool too would like to see it lengthened a bit really though. try using some screaming harmonics during the breakdown i think it would add more depth to the piece. good job theough dude.

overall: 7/10