#1
I wrote this when I was like 13. It's kind of off-the-wall. Especially the drums. Sometimes they're too crazy. It's good for a laugh though.

Many of the parts I still think are really cool though, like the reoccurring "Frappacino Themes" and from "The Bangladesh Pie Incident" to "Rambunctious Grapevines."

I pray you are entertained by this! (And I hope you'll find it somewhat interesting.)

Or else.


Let me know what your impression was!

-Ray
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Frozehnpyre.zip
#3
i found it rather enjoyable. you have some good ideas in there. but, it feels as if you've just put together ideas and riffs into this.. may i say mess? Some of it is trash, some needs rewriting, some is very good. You should take the parts you like and make something.
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#4
pretty intense man, i loved all the random names lol
Diatonic Frappacino was badass, lol and the ending Dying Wombat, the name made me lol.
the ending was cool though. My Favorite riff though was Walrus Pudding.
Badass man.

8.5/10
#5
Quote by champloo
pretty intense man, i loved all the random names lol
Diatonic Frappacino was badass, lol and the ending Dying Wombat, the name made me lol.
the ending was cool though. My Favorite riff though was Walrus Pudding.
Badass man.

8.5/10



lol Thanks man. The names came from the part of me that thinks it's Frank Zappa.
#6
overall
amazing work there
i liked most of it
a few bits and pices here and there, that you yourself should notice are a little too "distrought and dissonant" but a great work other than that
the solos, were amazing and what i liked the most, and ive gotta ask, who is your solo influence for writing

and overall, as a score crit, a solid 9/10
great job
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#8
Quote by talentfree
you managed the drums!
i liked it very much. <3
the solo at the beginning tied me to the song.
the accoustic.. amazing!
i love the atmosphere..
but i hate the keys t 37

dont know why but it reminds me of rpg games.



haha RPG games are cool (sometimes)! Thanks for the comment! Glad you liked it.
#9
It sounded like a BGM for the final boss of an RPG haha.
I love the names of the movements it kinda made me hungry
There were some parts that i didn't like much
like the Bangladesh Pie Incident and The Wombat Dies.
I wish you extended the keys in the end of Keyboard Melody 'cause
it had potential to be a great keyboard solo.
The main theme was very melodic and very good especially the Last Frappacino.
Overall I love the whole song. Very creative and colorful
8/10