#1
I just finished my english homework and we had to read a poem and write a poem in response to that one so...how does this sound?

Forgive my coyness my only one
I understand it's a quality you can't condone
If I be your love like any man should
Would you love me like any girl could?
I understand that the hour is near
But how can I be certain that my other won't hear?
So give me a little more time would you please
So I can say my last good-byes and do what I need.
#3
for a homework assignment, its good enough
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#4
thats what gay about peotry, they dont have to
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#5
Quote by Steve The Plank
'One' and 'Condone' don't rhyme.


It's an implied rhyme, it'll work.

Your rhythm is a little off sometimes, but overall it's not too bad.
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#6
Quote by Steve The Plank
'One' and 'Condone' don't rhyme.

Doesn't matter anyway ...


It's not bad for a homework assignment.
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#9
wrong forum. go to S & L
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#10
well yeah i know but its the only thing i can think of and in the book that the poem came from there was a poem that had "move" and then "love." does that rhyme? no i don't think so so STFU!!!!

just kidding with ya Steve