#1
is it comforting to know,
that you're everything i love.
does it make you smile,
to know you're everything i need.
you tear through my heart
with your eyes,
with your touch,
with your smile,
with your love.
i want you so badly,
yet you cant have me.

its about me and this girl. and we cant be together for unexplainable reasons. help would be encouraged as i am stuck right now. thanks.
#2
what's the music like?
Gear:
Epiphone G-400 Ebony
Line-6 UberMetal, EchoPark
Boss RC-2 Loop Station
Traynor YCV50Blue, Bass Mate 25, Guitar Mate 15
#3
its like the spill canvas. or thats why im going for. minor chords and downbeat rhythm. and im hoping the chorus turns out upbeat. lol