#1
I have been reluctant to post my lyrics for some time, but i feel like these two songs are good enough for people to see.

What I'd Ever Do:


This heavy heart of Mine
Makes it so hard to fly
So I need your wings
To take me up to the sky

Don't let me down, don't let me go
Because where I'll land
I may never know
So just hold on tight
It will be a good flight
for us


Chorus:
Pick me up
And Don't let me down
Don't let me touch ground

If I were to fall
Fall away from you
I don't know what I'd ever do

back to verse:
This great sky
Has never seemed so blue
Since the day
I went flying with you

Chorus:
Pick me up
And Don't let me down
Don't let me touch ground

If I were to fall
Fall away from you
I don't know what I'd ever do

---NEXT SONG-No Need to Fight Her---

The day I stop loving you
Is the day the sun won't shine
Even if the moon got in the way
You would still be mine

So Hold on to me a little tighter
And let's speak a little quiter
Because there's no need to fight her

Chorus:
You're in love
Just give up

There is no need to fight her
She can take you higher
than you are

back to verse:
She'll lead you in circles
Then lead you in again
She'll play games with your heart
That your hear will never win

But her smile could make the rain stop
Her body makes my mouth drop
But there's no need to fight her

Chorus:
Because You're in love
Just give up

There is no need to fight her
She can take you higher
than you are
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#2
okey i dont think your allowed to post two songs in one thread so ill crit before its closed.
first of all i liked the second one better than the first; it seemed to have a more unique structure and more interesting rhymes. i didnt really like the chorus in the first one for some reason. anyway love songs all look really corney without the music, even the best ones so rock on.

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