#1
Hey guys, just created my account (though i've coem to this site for a few months to get tabs 'n stuff..), and i just wanted to know what you guys think of some lyrics i wrote.
Don't be afraid to say it sucks, just tell me why it sucks :P
So, first post in a lifetime:
(btw, it say somewhere that life yet has to begin: I'm 16, hence..)


Mystery Blue:

I’m home alone on a weekend
Longing for companionship
Hoping no one will talk to me
And yet being alone

Got my share of friends around
My share of would-be company
But they don’t help this feeling
Of emotional poverty

Donno what to do
Donno where to go
Donno what to say and
What game to play
What is this mystery-blue

My life “yet has to begin”
It’d better turn out good
So my life will get the meaning
The way it should

Donno what to do
Donno where to go
Donno what to say and
What game to play
What is this mystery-blue

5 billion years ‘till the sun explodes
But 3 ‘till a near nebula crashes in to us
2000 years until the earth comes to its first end
And who am I to make a difference

Donno what to do
Donno where to go
Donno what to say and
What game to play
Why I’ve got these mysterious blues
#2
Need feedback? No. Need to read the rules.

Sorry to spoil your first post. This goes in the main s&l forum. I'd just move it, but it's not properly titled. Seeing that you're missing out on quite a few rules, I'll just close this thread, tell you to read the rules in the announcement atop the main S&L forum, and then post back in correct forum.

Thank you.