#1
This is just a rough draft and I hope to clean it up more for a better recording. I did all the brass and drums with Reason 3.0 but everything else is recorded. I don't know how good the mix is because I mixed it on a set of hi-fi speakers. Also, all of the solos are improvised, I wanted to keep it a true jazz song. Tell me what you think!


the song should be in my profile

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Last edited by WlCmToTheJungle at Mar 27, 2008,
#2
40 view and not one comment? harsh. Ill return a crit
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#3
ouch that was harsh.

Anyway, I can't really find any true fault with this, because I still can't really judge true jazz songs. The beauty of the yazz is that it can be anything. But I would have to say that the outro does get a bit lengthy IMO. Im sorry i can't really make a super lengthy crit like yours was but I can't judge true jazz songs for the life of me.
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#4
Well good job there... That was a perfect recording ... It was a perfect song for the genre and I don't listen to jazz but still this sounded great... I really don't know what to tell you to fix... it was really great... The panning on the drums was very nice too...

Good work
#5
This is pretty badass, Im no expert on this genre or anything, but it had me interested. I like the bass presence in the background, it kind of moves the whole song. I think the coolest part in the song was the little guitar jazz interlude, really swift playing. don;t know about the horn in teh background, you should have just kept it guitar and some background organ (?) Im guessing.

crit mine if you can:

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=817331
Originally posted by J_Dizzle
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#6
what horn are you talking about?

I'll get to your song don't worry. I have a big day ahead of me though (getting my license, doctors appt, then partying ) thanks for the feedback so far
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#7
During teh clean guitar interlude, solo piece, with that hum in the background.
Originally posted by J_Dizzle
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