#1
Composed, played, sung, and lyricized by yours truly. I think I like it. The balance is horrid, yes, but I can't seem to fix it.

Go ahead and give it a try! I'll gladly return the favor!

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#2
Hey,

I liked it. The recording quality was really good. The guitar/bass playing were great as well, and your singing was excellent and really added to the style/feeling of the song. The structure was well thought out and it flowed nicely. I really liked the style, or fusion of styles in the piece. I partciuraly liked the bass line in the song.

Not much to criticize, really. I didn't really like the guitar solo thingy at the beginning but it fitted in with the piece quite well, I guess. I'm just not really a big fan of the minor pentatonic

Apart from that, great stuff man.


maybe not up your street, but mind checking out something of mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=816667

Thanks!