#2
hi there,very much liked this!that was original,see if you could get some of the backgound noise out of there i think you'd improve it ten fold.great singing though,If i were you i would keep working on that track coz there is definitely something there
#5
well everyone is entitled to their opinions lol,if you think it is crap then obviously there ain't much point in trying to improve it then,i thought it was pretty good