cool tune. the band sounds tight. great guitar playing. I'm not crazy about the vocals (there are definite some pitch issues, especially at the end of each line) - but otherwise it rocks! keep it up.
I think the vocals are a damn side better than alot you get around. And the instrumentation its really cool. Could be tightened up a bit on the drumming side of things but other wise its all good!

Could you crit my new one on my profile please :p
Tell the drummer to take it easy on the crash cymbal jeez. The vocalist could do with some work also, he just doesn't sound as if he is a musician than one of your friends. Your gitar work sounds a lot like Ritchie Blackmore in some places. I think the song could be quite good if It was better recording quality, but for now I can't really tell.

crit mine pl0x? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=821881
My sig used to be so awesome it got me banned