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I'll crit yours if you crit mine. =)

C4C

Verse 1
Living, in a dreadful world
Believing in things that never existed
Love, in a sea of hate
Hypocrisy has never been so rampant.

Verse2
Time, heals all our wounds
Well least that’s what we all wish for
Dreams, they rise so high
Only to be trampled and deflated

Pre
And now I know that this,
Well I’ve got a life to live!
YEAH

Chorus
Hear the sound of my heartbeat racing
Hear the sound of my voice
The truth is not the same without you
But here I know, life goes on

Verse 3
Nights, I can never sleep
Think of all the habits I couldn’t kick
Fights, deafening silence
I can’t take this pain anymore

Pre
And now I know that this,
Is how I wanna live

Chorus
Hear the sound of my heartbeat racing
Hear the sound of my voice
The truth is not the same without you
But here I know, I trod on

That's how i got so far.
Dont wanna advance to far without ensuring the song has a good and strong start.
Thanks!
Last edited by Stumpo at Mar 31, 2008,