#1
This is my newest song, it probably my first full song that i can say i put a lilttle bit of effort in, i still don't know how to use Guitar Pro to well so i try my best anyways the usual
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Logan21
Attachments:
New SOng 2.zip
#2
Very, very nice. I love the absolute simplicity of it - kind of makes me feel like an ass, muddling around with classical.

Normally, I would make some sort of question as to where the solo was, but .. I don't think this piece needed it. It's simply straight to it. It just embodies that feeling of ignoring everything in the world when you're focused on kicking someone's ass.
#4
Didn't really like the rallentando part. Was quite redundant since all it done was lead into the main riff again. Perhaps adding a new section after that rallentando would give it more emphasis.

Other than that it was pretty good. Would make a good Alt/Hard Rock song that someone like Atreyu or Caliban would write.
#5
it's preety simple.. i like it.
reminds me of new metal (sorry )
hard not to bang (;
as i said.. it's simple. you cant do something really wrong
i like the bassline and the drums.
but it sounds a bit empty without vocals..
record it. with vocals. <:


crit my song ?
Last edited by talentfree at Mar 27, 2008,
#7
It does give a nu metal vibe kinda. It you had the two guitars doing something different more often it would make this sound fuller. I didn't like the clean guitar very much, imo it could have stayed distorted and had the same effect. There was nothing that made my mouth drop but it was solid. 6.5/10