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uhhh ok this is my first ever post... so... yea
i havent thought of a title for it yet but here it is

The coming spring thaws
My crystaline walls
As gossamer cracks
Answer sunlights calls

Brake! My Lie shatters
Entombed in your hate
You've used me, drained me
Abandoned to fate

The leech i never saw
Stabbing, smiling lies
Will it ever end
or bleeding i'll die

Brake! My Lie shatters
Entombed in your hate
You've used me, drained me
Abandoned to fate

This new world is harsh
Unforgiving red
I've been here before
Raw, broken and dead

Brake! My Lie shatters
Entombed in your hate
I'll savour this pain
And choose my own fate

so what do u think? constructive critisism welcome... its my first ever song so be nice