Ramik
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Join date: Oct 2006
270 IQ
#1
New song,
Give me some pointers
Probably not final version.
Attachments:
broken sweep.zip
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Boss DD20
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Ibanez TS7
EH Soul Preacher
BBE Sonix Maximizer 462 rack
Last edited by Ramik at Mar 27, 2008,
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Ant Farm Guitar
Join date: May 2007
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#3
I hear hella BTBAM influence. Pretty cool.
SchecterC-1+Man
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#4
That was awesome. Sounds like a better version of dragonforce haha


EDIT:^ I thought I heard some BTBAM and Protest the Hero possibly.
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Burning Raths
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#6
Pretty good. I liked this.
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#7
I loved all of it but it didn't flow well at all. It was too fast and some parts didn't join together well.
Octavarium666
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Join date: May 2007
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#8
Wow That was impresive, Like above posters said, sound like you been influence by the techcore bands (BTBAM,Protest the hero, The human abstract). I realy like it , and it got something most songs lack....AWESOME bass, especially the lil fills. Realy good job.

Oh yea the only thing that buged me was the ending..could have manage a bit of drum and bass but overall its all good

9.5/10

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=823092
FlyingPooooo
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#9
Intro is pretty catchy, although measure 6 doesn't filter into the next riff very well. Measure nine sounds childish, making the gorgeous sweep before it pointless. Oh my, 12 to 13 and 15 to 16....oh my, love it. The breakdown is pretty bad ass. The chuggy section works well, wish I could here it with better tone. I don't really like 46 to 60 for some reason, seems to random. Then again it sounds just like Between the Buried and Me and I love them.

Not much to say about the rest.
I like most of it though.


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Ramik
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Join date: Oct 2006
270 IQ
#10
Quote by ScreamingCheeto
Totally BTBAM, anyone else hear a very Alaska inspired riff at the start? Very good musically, you're clearly pretty proficient at theory.


Thanks but I didnt write this, a band member of mine wrote it , yes he very very very proficient in theory, he writes symphonies, all the theory he uses just hurts my head, and hes only 15. I am just posting here for feedback. We are probably going to change it around a bit, make less random parts. Ill pass on your message
Gear:

Esp Ltd DJ-600
Ibanez S520EX
Parker P 44 Pro
Traynor YCS100 Head
Traynor YCS412 cab
Boss NS-2
Boss DD20
Boss GE-21
Ibanez TS7
EH Soul Preacher
BBE Sonix Maximizer 462 rack