Frozzenn
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2008
178 IQ
#1
I was writing this, and ran into a snag. I have a hard time leading back into the verse after the chorus.. so I tried making this bridge, but it doesn't seem to help much. Ideas? Comments? Criticisms of any sort?

I hope you like it.
Attachments:
Meagan's song.zip
Jonathan Trejo
ZeBlaZeD
Join date: Nov 2007
1,438 IQ
#2
Well yeah cause you stopped writing. Theres really nothing i can help you with cause you have to develop your own writing style. All i can say is keep doing trial and error till u get the sound you want. I really like the intro. And when the drums come in thats awesome!. 10/10 as the intro. c4c https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=821499
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