#1
The song is in my profile:

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/shortyafter/

It's called Hotel Lights. This is a rough demo, I just added vocals and lyrics. I guess you could call it Ska/Punk but it's really pop rock with ska elements added. No vocals on the second verse, yet.

Anyway, tell me what you think. If you leave a link I'll crit yours. Thanks!
#2
This is a cool song. It's fun and lively. I like the chord progressions. They fit the song well. The vocals are done well too. I think it's graet for a rough demo. Maybe in the final version bring out the guitar parts more?
#3
I like it. Not too shabby at all. Nice quality, pretty tight. I like that little solo break you did in there, and the vocals were very fitting. Enjoyed the lyrics, but the overall song could use a bit more varaition in my opinion. Not bad at all though. Mind giving mine a listen?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=822503
If you want to jam in/around Mooresville NC message me.
#6
Quote by shortyafter
The song is in my profile:

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/shortyafter/

It's called Hotel Lights. This is a rough demo, I just added vocals and lyrics. I guess you could call it Ska/Punk but it's really pop rock with ska elements added. No vocals on the second verse, yet.

Anyway, tell me what you think. If you leave a link I'll crit yours. Thanks!


Out of time right off the bat.

Mega fail.

Oh god.

Vocals..

OH GOD.

OH GOOODD
AHHH

AHHH
This sucks.

Go away, Blink 182.
#7
Out of time? Where? That makes me very curious since you're the first person to pick up on it.

I'll ignore the rest of your post. If you don't like something, that's fine, but you don't have to be a dick about it. Being constructive would be nice too.

I'll take the Blink-182 thing as a compliment.

*reported*


PS: Anything you'd like me to crit?
Last edited by shortyafter at Mar 29, 2008,