#1
i was listening to the seventh trumpet by August burns red one day and i was inspired to write a song that is so true about the people of today

The Past Remains

No look what you have done
Look at what you've become
Your ruining everything he's made
For us
How can you do such blasphmey
Your ignorence chokes you
Your violence haunts you
Your freedom tempts you
And your sin takes you away
The pressure no more
The Bleeding no more!

The past remains
But the future can cange
For us all
Just think for a second or two
And realize what you do
(repeat)
Is wrong!

You feel the anger burning
Just like your silent screams
Comforting so comforting
Just like in your dreams
You can be free of your pain
Just take the simple plan
Its a plan called Christ
Dont let anyone tell you otherwise

The past remains
But the future will change
For us all
Just think for a second or two
And realize what you do
(reapet)
Is wrong!

He gave his only son for you
His only begodden son just for you

Trash all your anger and violence now
Burn through the city walls somehow
Spreading the message and delivering Christ
Dont let the serpent fool you twice!!

(you know he said)
Let there be light
Let there be sound
Let there be man
Let there be animals
Let there be light
Let there be light
DARKNESS NO LONGER COVERS THE SKY!!!!!
(repeat)
#2
not bad at all. but the bible never said anything about God saying let there be sound. but, i see where you you get that from since it is a song.
"Then I saw that there was a way to hell, even from the gates of heaven."
-John Bunyan
#3
religion = fail.

lolreligion
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sublime (seen)
nirvana (seen 2 times)
the beatles (seen)
jimi hendrix (seen)
bob marley (got tickets)
the doors (buying tickets soon)
frank sinatra
creed (seen 9 times)
ray charles (seen)
#4
Quote by matteo cubano
not bad at all. but the bible never said anything about God saying let there be sound. but, i see where you you get that from since it is a song.


i know he never said that but it was just a refrence because he still created those things!
#5
well id say change the you and your in the first verse to we and our cause people are quick to get offended when you talk about God. and also its spelled begotten. sorry im kind of anal about spelling. other than that its good. its hard to write christian songs that dont sound like other christian songs but this is good. and dont be discouraged if people jump all over you for saying they are "doing wrong".