#3
Pretty cool stuff. I like the wah guitar. Lots of cool licks going on. This is pretty solid guitar wise, but I think you need a prominent bass line. Probably some kind of slap. It would really bring this song to life and make it truly funky. Also, the sound is a bit muddy but that might just be your equipment.

So yeah, good guitar work just see if you can spice it up with some more bass. Nice song though, good work.

Crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=823207

Thanks!
#4
thanks for the feedback...RHCP? ill check em out...never heard of them though.
I have a friend who can slap bass ill get him to lay down some tracks for sure.
#6
ya most def add some sweet bass. the drums didnt really seem to accent the funk too much. they seemed a bit too alt rock this song. you have the guitar down perfectly though. it seems a bit simplistic to really get the grove in. i want to hear some crazy drum stuff, with crazy hi hat stuff, lot off triplets, and some off beat stuff. soloing could have been a bit cleaner. some of the riffing is pretty neat though. to make it a really superb funk song though, add some more crazy stuff, and some really really catchy lines.

cfc? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=824396
dude, what about an actual solo in death metal instead of that poof from linkin park. Think of Pulse of the Maggots - Bed Of Razors


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