#1
Hey, this is my first post on this forum...
Exciting, no?
Well, these are some lyrics I've written.
They are purely for comedic perposes, so if you're offended by "sexually explicit" lyrics, then I guess you shouldn't read this... Not that they're that bad.
I'm actually a bit worried about posting... You know, people might try to steal the lyrics... Not that they would... But now I'm just going on... Let's get to the song.
If I'm supposed to like "censor" anything, or I'm not posting anywhere right, please tell me, coz I really have no idea what I'm doing. I'm a noob to forum stuff.

Chorus
We’re gonna blast the music,
And we’ll par-par-party.
We’ll piss off the neighbors,
While we par-par-party.
The ground’ll be shakin’,
While the music is blastin’.
All the chicks and drink,
Will leave you flabbergasted.

Verse one
We’re gonna par-par-party,
Through the night.
Maybe someone,
Will get in a fight.

Bridge
People will get wasted,
People will get laid.
People will get so drunk,
They’d wish they never came.

Verse two
This par-par-party,
Is outta sight.
Ask me to dance,
And I just might.

Breakdown
You bring the chicks,
And I’ll bring the beer.
Let’s make sure,
There are no queers.
Blast the techno,
And blast the rock.
Gotta make sure,
This party won’t suck.


So, yeah.
That's not the structure or anything.
The structure's more like:
Intro
Chorus
Verse one
Bridge
Chorus
Verse two
Bridge
Chorus
Breakdown
Interlude
Chorus
Outro


So yeah.
That's it.
Feel free to "crit" as I've seen youse call it in other forums...
#2
Beastie boys, we got a right to party..

its what it reminded me of personally, but its well structured. what genre were you aiming for ?..

double post lol...woops
#3
Quote by DieKrupps
Beastie boys, we got a right to party..

its what it reminded me of personally, but its well structured. what genre were you aiming for ?..


Hey, it is a bit like that song eh? Didn't even notice. Haha.
I'm going for a bit of a hardcore rock sound with it.

Oh, and thanks.
Last edited by zachary-tfn at Mar 29, 2008,
#5
Quote by NICKOLASrox
sounds like it could be techno.

You know, at one time I was actually planning for it to be a techno/rock song. Might go back to that idea...