#2
Seemed a bit messy. Keep practicing.
Gear:
Electric
Yamaha RGX520
Fender Strat HSS

Acoustic
1952 Martin and Co 00-18.
Yamaha FGX730SCA

Amp
Fender Twin Reverb
Fender Amp FM25 DSP

Pedals
Boss DS-1
#3
just a word of advice, you should play to a metronome or along with the CD, ur timing is bit a sloppy but nothing that u cant improve on!
#4
yea i dint realize that at first but now watching it i realize some timing problemz
#5
ya play along with the CD until you get the timing right and you need to work on nailing all the correct notes there were a couple mistakes

but its not bad at all, how long have you been playing?

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