#1
This is a piece I wrote a couple days back.. Any feedback is welcome.

Colours.

The words and the colours
Beats and the rhymes
I've got an iPod ad's worth of expression
And it's spilling, unravelling
From fingers to strings
To ink into parchment
Different shade? New compartment
For every colour and hue
The ebb and the flow
From black into blue
From lime into mauve
From every direction this takes
To every word on this page
I'm driven by the colours
The colours, the colours
All I see are the colours
#2
Sweet lyric, what type of music are you going to apply this to (if any)?
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#3
Quote by asfastasdark
Sweet lyric, what type of music are you going to apply this to (if any)?
Thanks to both of you To tell you the truth, the thought of putting this to music never even crossed my mind.. If I did, though, it'd probably be a quirky little acoustic song like everything else I seem to write these days.