#1
It may just be an acoustic demo but I liked the way it turned out. And yes, I know that my voice isn't the best.

You can listen to it on my band's myspace here.
#2
Vocals are pitchy. Goes out of key sometimes. I'd try to sing the song at a higher pitch, it would be alot easier and it would sound better. Good quality though! Good base for a song, lyrics might need some work on rhyme/flow, but it's a good solid song, keep it up.

Crit mine? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=822784

2004 MIM Strat w/ Fender Hot Noiseless pickups
Sovtek MiG 60
Avatar 2x12 w/ Celestion Greenbacks
Snark Tuner
MXR Custom Comp
Fulltone Full-Drive 2
Dunlop JHM3 Univibe
TC electronic Nova Delay
TC electronic Arena Reverb