#1
It's been awhile since I've posted anything, so I'm just gonna post a small part that I started last night. It's kinda boring IMO and it just kinda repeats over and over again in different keys but I'd like some feedback on how I can spice it up.

guitars pretty lacking in coolness I think.
bass was taken from another song I've been doing.
and the whole thing started with the drum beat which is pretty sweet I think. *shrug*

but any comments would be awesome.
Attachments:
2-7-5.zip
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
#3
I actually like it, except for the drumbeat. Bass pretty groovin`, too.
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#4
whoa! this came back.

drum beat was just boredom/wankery by me anyways. haha. and I turned something out of it.

Edit: and I added a rhythm part awhile ago. Here it is.

and it seems as though volumes and pans are a bit out of wack so adjust those to hear everything okay.
Attachments:
2-7-5.zip
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
Last edited by Its_Rock77 at Jul 16, 2008,