First off, the guitar sounds really good. Nice quality. Your voice isn't bad at all especially considering it was done in one take. It just sounds like you could be a little off. It sounds awesome when the drums come in. Overall, I thought it was really fun to listen to. I would suggest spending more time on the vocals though.

comment me?
thanks, i was trying out a new way of recording, it got a lot better sound quality than the way i'd been doing things before.

i'm listening to your song now, i'll be replying in your topic.