#1
Late Night Talks


Staring up at the sky
I remember that night
When everything felt right
I felt compelled to **** it up

I asked you “Would you care if I
Told you that I want to die”
You looked right in my eyes and said
“I will never love you if you’re dead”

So I’ve gotta keep myself alive, tonight
I gotta make it through this night, alright
These late night conversations, will be the death of me
But I will keep
Making sure, that you all hate me.

When this night was over
I made a promise to myself
That I will never, on intention
**** this up again

So I’ve gotta keep myself alive, tonight
I gotta make it through this night, alright
These late night conversations, will be the death of me
But I will keep
Making sure, that you all hate me. x2

(But I bet we both know
I can’t keep a promise)


Crits?
#2
Yup, those are definitely lyrics.
Journalism is just a gun. It's only got one bullet in it, but if you aim right, that's all you need. Aim it right, and you can blow a kneecap off the world.
#3
I like em
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#5
not to bad. they make me think you might be suicidal. like I always say though sometimes swear works can kill a song. depends. I just mean when you use a swear word look it over and make sure it fits.
#6
Quote by Gregoriose
not to bad. they make me think you might be suicidal. like I always say though sometimes swear works can kill a song. depends. I just mean when you use a swear word look it over and make sure it fits.

I know what you mean. I try not to swear too much, but it flows that way.


And for the record, I am currently (as in the past month or so) have been feeling suicidal.