reaper_x
No. Just... No.
Join date: Jan 2008
717 IQ
#1
Hell Yeah.
Wrote this in one day. I think it's my best piece, so far.
The riffs are pretty straight forward, but sounds good
as hell. I MAY give it to my band to play.
I Need to know what you guys think.

[2 Guitars, Bass, Drums]
C4C!!
Attachments:
ScreamoC#m.zip
Your light bulb knows everything you do in your room.
To The End
Thank You for the Venom
Join date: Jun 2006
958 IQ
#2
i think the break section sounds pretty good

the drums in the chorus sound a bit wierd and the whole thing just gets to repetitive

in the intro maybe u could harmonize those single notes
flea_is_my_god
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2006
124 IQ
#3
wheres the screamo? i like your bridge but verse and chorus are repetative and rather bland
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Deniz
Join date: Jan 2008
383 IQ
#4
its really repetitive and the riffs are sort of boring.
maybe you should take more time to write a song next time, put a bit more effort into your riffs.
Matt Chavie
aspiring breakdancer...
Join date: Jul 2007
2,648 IQ
#5
It was uber repetitive, and kinda generic sounding, nothing said "I WROTE THIS!"
PinkIsCool
UG's Pink Pirate!
Join date: Mar 2006
2,002 IQ
#6
Really generic. Most of your riffs sounded the same, or have been done before.
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Burning Raths
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2007
117 IQ
#7
Sorry to say, but it was a little boring... Same thing over and over again. No soul and no emotions...
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