#2
That's pretty good. Catchy little guitar riffs. Vocals were pretty good. I thought percussion could be a little more interesting. But good nonetheless.

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#3
i write as i listen, ok i cant hear the bass really, turn it up. Ok well to start off with the guitars are really square, theres no real feel to them. Vocals sound great really although lyrics could do with some more work. Like the above guy said drums are really boring, need some fills etc. Not too much mind. Rhythm guitar is not really that good, but i like the lead riff. Sort out the rhythm parts and the tone of the rhythm guitar too, turn up the bass, add some nicer drums (or a better drummer) work on the lyrics and youl have a great song. Definatly got potential though.

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#5
like, the guitars are very choppy, and theres not much flow to it if you know what i mean.

Square was a very vivid description lol
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#6
I’m assuming he means not enough dynamics?
I quite liked it, it's catchy, the vocals were good, I agree though it needs some extra drum fills to living it up a bit and maybe a mid 8 or something. All-round though I thought it was good
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#9
I liked it a lot. I thought the recording sounded far too muffled, but dug the song.

Dynamics mean variations, not just volume but flow up and down.
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#10
Glad you guys are digging the song.

As for the recording being muffled..it sounds really good on some speakers and muffled on others...I cannot figure it out haha.
#12
Good song man. The vocal and guitar melodies are catchy and the singing is perfect.
Can't think of any suggestions to make really :/

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